Friday, July 14, 2006
stuck now on this mini poem? that xi wen wrote... at the end of her most recent blog post :

Shallow are those who look at the surface
And nothing beyond
Superficial are those who say sweet nothings
With crossed fingers behind their backs
Remembering with a tinge of bitterness
How much I was blinded
By words, by rashness
By a jump of heartbeat
A tinge of bitterness, nothing more
And let there be nothing then
When I see the familar yet foreign face
Knowing I knew but did not knew
And when I can look straight into the eye
And smile with true friendship
I'll know that it's over
Truely over.

okays. firstly, i think that if take out the "and" before the "let there....", change the 'did not...' "knew" into "know" and spell truly correctly, ie "truly" and not "truely", then it'd be great!! but it's already great... hmmm.. so it'd be greater? hahahas..

duno why the last 8 lines are stuck in my head... okay, maybe i DO know.. it's just that i refuse to admit it - at least 1/2 the time. hah..

anyways, gona go sleep already. continue another day. =)
'please don't stop the music 2:45 pm



now playing :
song of my life.
Past the point of no return -
no backward glances:
the games we've played
till now are at an end.
Past all thought of "if"
or "when" -
no use resisting:
abandon thought,
and let the dream descend . . .


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